This sentence has five words. Here are five more words. Five-word
sentences are fine. But several together become monotonous. Listen to
what is happening. The writing is getting boring. The sound of it
drones. It’s like a stuck record. The ear demands some variety. Now
listen. I vary the sentence length, and I create music. Music. The
writing sings. It has a pleasant rhythm, a lilt, a harmony. I use short
sentences. And I use sentences of medium length. And sometimes, when I
am certain the reader is rested, I will engage him with a sentence of
considerable length, a sentence that burns with energy and builds with
all the impetus of a crescendo, the roll of the drums, the crash of the
cymbals–sounds that say listen to this, it is important.
Sunday, March 30, 2014
Monday, March 3, 2014
Geometry
It is
like a looming rock wall
that you have to climb
by the year's end.
But the wall is so steep,
and so tall,
you wish you'd chose an easier climb.
But now you're stuck here,
and you have to climb so fast
on a such a difficult wall.
And the teacher isn't really helping,
as she watches from above
as you struggle to reach for the next rock.
She tells you where to hold,
how to climb,
how to reach,
how to pull yourself up.
But she goes so fast,
and you can't hear everything,
and you struggle to learn
as you climb the wall.
And as she talks
you feel so frustrated
and want her to explain more,
instead of having you learn
from ways you don't even understand.
So now, you're tired.
And someone has already decided to stop,
and climb an easier wall
and you wish you could join him.
But you stay,
climbing this wall,
and you look up,
and see you're getting closer to the end,
but you're still so far away.
And you wish that
this wall would just be over,
and you could walk away,
only to have co climb another wall.
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